Craft: Based on the written critiques from my piers, no one commented that my craft was poor. However, there were a few suggestions. One suggested that I should change the variation of the chess pieces to a more menacing color such as red, black, or silver.
Composition: Scaling different objects lead the eye to the chess pieces first. By changing the background, I brought out more of the objects. However, the some commented that they enjoyed the background with its natural variation because it made the area more ALIVE!
Concept: My piers seem to understand the message of chaos and destruction that I wanted to capture. many had this thought that the pieces were falling out of the sky for some reason.
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